I always find

"Dear .........., Fancy a fuck?"

works everytime. It's short and to the point, no misunderstanding in the meaning, it is poetic but forceful plus my vocabulary doesn't stretch much further.

Another seductive line is,

"Suck my cock!"

Again it's poetic and will have women at your knees.

Before long, and as confidence grows, you can add the word the word "Bitch".

Thanks

Intention is everything! Good thoughts + grammar = good energy.
Feel it before you write it. Can you feel the love in this post? That's how you want your initial contact letter to feel. ;-)

"we like what we see" and "want to skrew"

^ Examples of two e-mails we recently received.

When we send an e-mail, we start off with a greeting, and then we tell them we liked their profile and why (because we read the entire thing and something piqued our interest.)

We try to keep it a decent length: not a novella and not a one-liner but enough for people to realize we know how to speak properly and have brains :)

So in reading this a simple hi how are you I am blank doesn't work?

PollyAnna, welcome to the forums. Hope you enjoy yourselves, and make yourself at home. There are a lot of good people who post here; the discussions can be informative and sometimes "lively." ha.

Btw, I used to kick around in your area, many years ago. A post-midnight trek up to Peabody is slowly finding its way back from storage in my longterm memory.

Seeing as we hate one liners or really long emails from others, we try to send an email like we would like to receive.

We let them know that both of us enjoyed their profile and pics, and that we have opened up our face pics so they can base their reply or non reply after having seen all of us.

We include a sentence or two about us, politely ask them to read our profile and that we would love to hear back if interested.

Four or five sentences absolute maximum.

thank you Gina!

thank you , for your suggestion ,iam trying to find the best way of just doing that,-what you said. ,many kind thanks!

to also comment specifically on a picture, maybe notice the color of the straps on a lacey thing and how she looks in it, maybe just ask a more specific question about something written in the profile...

That said, is there a reason your profile isn't open to couples?

What are you looking for on here, Man of Steel? know yourself well, maybe offer up a phrase about yourself too. Most of us, even me, the "grammatician," as I was called in another post, will easily forgive typos and mistakes if I can see that they are simply that and not an example of how a person actually writes everything.

Good luck,
Gina