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TOPIC: would be grateful if you gave feedback on my profile
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| I would be grateful if you gave feedback on my profile. I recentl changed it to say tha I'm lookingfor frinds in the lifestyle, and am interested in a serious partner. Please help me with feedback and criticism. |
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yea Legal, it would be better to make your own thread, (but i thought it was a nice profile)
Beastyboy, i see what another post meant below about 'wanting to get married'... but i guess that has to do with your poly side.... i think you might have to seperate your swinging side and poly side, and focus just on your swinging side here, with a mention of your poly interest... and yea, i heard sminging is not that much fun. use spell check again. to both of you, welcome to the forums. |
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Legal, could you
post a request in a thread of your own, using full sentences? It is not polite to hijack another member's review thread. |
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"moonlight walks on the beach." LOL Stgala, now he'll forever be associated with the Pina Colada song. ROFLMAO :)
Beastie, profile version 2.0 isn't far from a dating site, either :( Considering you made changes after my previous comment about using spell check, it is safe to assume you intended to use the word "sminging" in your profile...good choice, it does sound better than outright telling people you fell from the ugly tree. |
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No, sorry, it still sounds like something from a dating site. All it's lacking is "moonlight walks on the beach."
For all I know, that approach might work on here, particularly if you want to get married, but I'd be surprised if it got you many responses from couples. - ST |
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Tablefor3,
Thanks for the feedback. I edited to say who I am and what I'm looking for better, and sound like I'm a swingers site. I moved the part about wanting a partner, when its right, to the bottom. And. You're right about the speling. Sometimes I get lazy typing on my phone,bad habit. More feedback from anyone would be helpful. I'm trying to communicate that I'm one of the great guys looking for friends and lovers. |
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Your profile reads like you posted your singles site profile on SLS, rewrite it for a swingers site. (BTW, when you claim to strive for excellence at work, you're really setting yourself up for criticism by not using spell check. Just saying.)
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I would be grateful if you gave feedback on my profile. I recentl changed it to say tha I'm lookingfor frinds in the lifestyle, and am interested in a serious partner. Please help me with feedback and criticism.
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