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TOPIC: wondering_what_we_could_do_to_improve_our_profile
Created by: mercercocouple
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everyone please take a look at it, and let us know what you think we could do to improve it. any info is much appreciated.

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It's perfectly fine to me. About the only thing I don't like is that you state you answer about 75% of all e-mail.....that could possibly be a turn-off to some folks, they may feel why bother. You come across as truthful, which is a very good thing, and state you are also looking to establish a friendship, which many people (it seems to me, us included), look for in a swing relationship. All the best to you, Mrs. Buff

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thanks so much for the info, agreed with ya on the bdsm thing, we're not even really into it lol... just wanted to mention that it was up for discussion lol... oh well.. about the grammatical problems, english has never been my strong suit lol... thanks for your input!!

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We really liked your profile for it's honesty and straightford handling of the key issues we like to see addressed by a prospective couple. Well done.

The only thing that might keep some from responding is the the parenthetical BDSM reference toward the bottom of your profile. That scares alot of folks away. Since it's almost a throw away comment, you may be better off deleting it. It's something you can handle verbally on Yahoo rather than mentioning it to such a vanilla audience.

That said, there are only a few other minor grammatical glitches that most here won't even notice and which don't really affect the quality of your profile. Good Luck with your search.

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everyone please take a look at it, and let us know what you think we could do to improve it. any info is much appreciated.

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TOPIC: wondering what we could do to improve our profile
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