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TOPIC: what could I do to create a better profile
Created by: pol111
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What could I do to create a better profile? Any sugestions would be great.
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Pol,

I co-moderate an SLS group called "Single Men Welcome Here". We have a forum thread called "Profiles" were you can also get advice. I sent you an invite. Everyone (except married men playing alone) is welcome to join as long as they keep it classy.

I think you've done a nice job with your profile but I would suggest adding some humor to it, especially with the tag line. There are also a few grammatical and punctuation errors.

The best of luck to you.

~ Jen
Dallas PA
 
 
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you have a wonderful smile, very natural. and a great bod too. ;) someone is going to be lucky.

overall an excellent profile, well written. no questions about where you stand.

would you please critique ours? see WFFB (= Wildfire (him) + Freebird)

Freebird (her)
Rome NY
 
 
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What could I do to create a better profile? Any sugestions would be great.
Breckenridge CO
 
 
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