Using complete sentences, proper punctuation and correct spelling would be a good start for changes. You might also want to read the section headings b/c while I understand that in the first section you are talking about yourself, technically, you state that you are looking for just a guy that knows the role in MFM and can deliver it.

Other than that ~ your profile simply looks like just about every single guys profile on SLS to me. You know about MFM and can deliver. You're hot. You have lots of fantasies. You prefer daytime.