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Again, I suggest reading it out loud to each other. You'll find the natural pauses and simple mistakes (SINLGE being one of those mistakes). Also, when you read it out loud, overemphasize the capitalized words, because when you do that, you'll hear how you sound to us who are reading it (it sounds a lot like shouting to us).
Otherwise, you state it clearly. Very nice pics too. Gina |
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