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TOPIC: profile critique please
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doublesexy
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| We're still pretty new so i'm not realky stressing that we haven't really had much of a reaction to our profile but thought i'd ask if anyone has any tips thanks :) |
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Three turnoffs stand out in your profile: lack of capitalization at the beginning of sentences; lack of any punctuation whatsoever; and the first person pronoun "I" isn't capitalized.
Giving you the benefit of any doubt that you know basic grammar, your profile leaves us with the impression you either don't care or are too lazy to take those couple extra minutes proofreading for a good first impression...just saying. |
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We're still pretty new so i'm not realky stressing that we haven't really had much of a reaction to our profile but thought i'd ask if anyone has any tips thanks :)
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TOPIC: profile critique please
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