I agree with tablefor---
Lose the tongue.
It does show a playful fun attitude but not much restraint, and the majority of people on this site profess to want no drama. If you come across as the least bit immature and exude a "throw caution to the winds" style you may have some difficulty finding playmates. But perhaps this attitude is what you are looking for in potential partners...?
Personally, and I might just be an old cougar to you, but the reference to drinking games and emphasis on alcohol does nothing for me or my man. Sounds like you're still in school.

to steal a phrase:

Just my .02cents

You still have your sections reversed. 'Description' is where you describe yourself; 'what you are looking for' is the place you put info about others you seek. While things are grouped together more appropriately, the body is still not a smooth read -- did you try reading your profile out loud to each other?

On your pictures, do you really think the tongue hanging out helps make you look attractive to others????? You're 34, not 17.

Good luck
Mrs TF3

ok how about now. any better?

thank you. we will work on it and get back to you.

Welcome to the forums. (Been a while since I scored a first post virgin!) Our take on your profile is "messy." You've got your own description mixed together with what you are looking for, and everything appears randomly placed throughout both sections :( For starters, separate items into their respective sections, then read though each section aloud, rearranging and editing the details for smoother reading. Also, take a close look at your pictures, do they present you in a good light? For instance, will others see your horndog pictures as "cool fun guy" or "drunken loser dude" or something else? (If it matters, I didn't see fun...) Remember, your profile leaves a lasting first impression. Deliver the message you intend :) That's our opinion, YMMV, good luck. Mrs TF3

we are looking for soft swap and single females. any help to better our profile would be great. thank you for all who look and help ;)