Damn I feel like we just got raked over the coals getting a mid-term graded but we wanted honesty and we got it and we appreciate the notes. Thank you again for taking your time to help us out

We respectfully disagree with Wanta3way. Your profile needs help. Knowing you read the improvement threads and took notes, we're surprised you missed the following points commonly suggested to other profiles seeking review: 1) Follow site rules - you have external (yahoo) contact information posted. SLS has been known to take profiles offline, or worse, for such violations. 2) Text-speak - unless you're a teeny bopper, u isn't interchangeable with you, nor 4 with for, nor b with be, nor 2 with to... 3) Syntax - check your sentence structure, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, etc....the third section of your profile is a confusing run-on sentence, for instance. 4) Word use - while some words sound alike, they have very different meanings and usage . Common examples of these words include to/too/two and through/threw. Not sure which to use? Look them up in a dictionary, or website like dictionary dot com. 5) Read your own profile - doing a read through will catch most items noted above. Take turns reading the profile out loud to your partner. This will force you to read it more slowly, deliberately, causing poorly written items to stand out. Take notes, make improvements, read it again...repeat until both are satisfied with the resulting profile. 6) Pictures - pictures give the first profile impression, make them count! Get rid of any "in the mirror" shots, anything taken with your cell phone or web cam, and those with Walmart as your background. Use an actual camera and decent lighting, show both partners in a good way...avoid money shots of butt, breasts or genital regions, save something for sharing in person. Good luck, we'll check back to see what improvements you incorporate in your profile.

Thanks wants for taking the time to review yeah that is quite a road trip

Looks good . wish you were closer

We went threw and read some of the exciting forums on here and took notes we redid the entire profile today so if we could some folks here to review it please don't pull no punches and critique away