Hello
We dont have room to give you advice when we are still working on ours. However it would seem from reading a lot of single guys profile they all say the same thing. You need to find the edge over all the other single guys.
But then again you might have the edge. Your profile looks good, better yet when Mrs.NL gets in I will have her look it over and see what she has to say.

Thanks to both Swingpixie and Intimitadors for the great advice. I have made some changes , will keep tweaking the profile and will get better pictures. You both have made me feel more welcome here and its too bad we arent closer. Thanks again TZ

It’s a pretty good start. I would delete the pic of you with the cluttered mess in the background (garage pic?). The other pics are fine. The written text is OK, but didn’t make me smile or laugh. Are you all about sex or are you also interested building lasting friendships? Would I enjoy being around you in a platonic setting? There are also too many grammatical errors throughout as well. Take what you’ve written, paste it onto Word and fix those mistakes. You want to present yourself as a clean, well spoken, literate, funny, and that you have all those traits which make up a gentleman (kind, respectful, patient, chivalrous, etc). Remember, you’re trying to seduce the mind of the woman AND the man, albeit in different ways. Odds are, he will be reading your introductory emails. The man tends to be the gatekeeper, meaning if he doesn’t see you in a positive light, then nothing will happen. So, you might want to demonstrate that you know this and that you respect him and their relationship as well. Just little things like that will set you apart from the rest. You’re close… keep at it!

Its so hard for an older single guy here (no luck at all so far) .. Im new to the lifestyle .. so I could use any help I can get .. please help me improve my profile .. any critique is ok .. thanks in advance TZ