Heey Retain!!!,

I will be home in under 60 days. Maybe we can do lunch or dinner or something. On the profile, I for one would like to see more pics (but I am a perv so, the more the better) Any way, 2 months to go and maybe we can do lunch to meet up.

Thanks for your reply Gina. I took care of the word problems (Darn Proofreader). I put our pics in different order so all can see. The Tux pic is just to show that i can "clean up" nice! Thanks again.

You might want to start a new post, as this could get confusing w/ two people who want feedback. Welcome to the forums. I would suggest more, or different pics of yourselves, so the one pic we can all see won't just seem like you came from church. Might be a turn on for some, but not for most. For the most part, your profile is well worded. You might want to rethink using the "no no" expression twice. Also, 1st paragraph change "there" to "they're" and in a later paragraph, it should be "dining" and not "dinning" Those are just the standout errors for a first read through. Okay, good luck and enjoy the return to swinging! Gina

Hopefully to OP won't mind if i jump in here for a critique as well. We've been around for awhile, took a loooonnng break and are getting back "into the swing of things". Been lurking for awhile but this is 1st (hopefully of many more) post. Everyone here does a great job of helping so i come to you hat in hand requesting a profile review.

Mr. hbgcpl

I agree with Gina...I wouldn't click on the profile to open it from the tag line. Obviously from our profile, I'm a big believer in pictures. I will not contact someone without having a better visual of their body type. Other than that...it is okay.

good luck
Sassy

hahaha...I'm always proud of you Shell.

When reading this particular thread, on feedback on profiles, I try not to read the other opinions so I'm not influenced by them before I offer my own opinion of a profile. Makes sense?

Love ya Shell...and your proper sentences are a turn on.

hehehehe.
Gina

I would say that I would pass this one up, just based on the "ne" in your tagline. Is it too hard to write the word "any?"

That said, you could use more pics, and more specifics in describing yourselves. The only time you say anything specific at all as to preferences or descriptions is at the end when you state your non interest in black men. That's all that stands out.

Pass.

Gina

I think its an alright profile but leaves a lot kind of hanging out there. You say that you are highly sexual but you honestly do not tell me what you are into and you don't tell me about yourself outside of the bedroom. I mean, I appreciate the fact that you are highly sexual. But what does that mean, highly sexual to one is not necessarily the same to another. I also like when people tell what they are like "normally". Are you into fishing, camping, boating, etc. It gives one some insight on whether or not there is a connection there. Remember, not all we are going to do is fuck so I need to like you as a person...there has to be more to you than just a vagina and a penis. Oooh that was so proper, Gina will be proud of me lol. I like profiles that use humor in them, that helps catch your eye. Your profile should be able to stand out from among the rest of them.