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TOPIC: need_help_on_profile
Created by: railroaderone23
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I dont get any responces to my profile. could somebody look it over and let me know what changes need made. Thanks in advance

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Just my opinion...

I would change your tagline immediately. I know it can be hard to come up with something clever for that space but your choice to say : "This is important what should I write " doesn't make me want to even look at your profile. Both your lack of punctuation and of gumption are a turn off.

As for the content of your profile, go back and revise it to be in complete sentences with proper grammar and punctuation. I know this isn't an English class but I'm looking for someone who I can connect with intellectually and sexually. If someone doesn't take the initiative to put care and creativity into their profile, I doubt they'll put those skills into our time together.

Make sure that the content of each section is appropriate for that section. For instance, in the section for "fantasies or real experiences" you have a couple of sentences about your custody schedule. That should be under "description" as it has nothing to do with sexual fantasies or experiences.

I'd also focus on the positive and show some confidence. Your tagline already makes me doubt your confidence and now I read things such as "some women say I look alright." Honestly, one of the first things I learned in the LS is that confidence and being comfortable in your own skin are major facets of being "sexy." On top of that, I don't think most couples and ladies want to meet with a man who lacks confidence. I sure don't want to reassure you time and time again that you were good or i enjoyed it or whatever... lordy, that's the nonsense I'm trying to avoid in the real world!

Finally, I'd take a new profile picture. The lighting on it looks like the old snapshots from the 1970s that we have in our family albums. It makes you seem older than you truly are -- my goodess, you're 39! That's still young and vibrant. Perhaps you could include some pictures from your favorite activities like on an ATV or at a NASCAR event? Also, smile! A great smile goes a long way.

Best of luck to you!

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I dont get any responces to my profile. could somebody look it over and let me know what changes need made. Thanks in advance

Bluefield WV
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