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TOPIC: Yet Another Profile Review
Created by: BlackPipe8
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Hello, i'm very new here and hoping I have a decent profile to start off with. Can I get a review?

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ok will make another change, thanks for the input. I often find myself thinking way ahead of what the hands are typing.

Catonsville MD
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BlackPipe8,

You might want to proofread again, there are several "I" pronouns and a couple sentences that need to be capitalized appropriately.

Word usage concerns: "I have a athletic build." -- should be "an" not "a". "I am a 5' 10" and weigh 215" -- you ought lose the "a" from this sentence, or lose this extraneous sentence entirely, as your height and weight are already listed in the profile stats.

Good luck, Mrs TF3

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Ok, thanks, I'll make changes tonite.

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Anyone?

Catonsville MD
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Hello, i'm very new here and hoping I have a decent profile to start off with. Can I get a review?

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