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TOPIC: Yet_Another_Profile_Review
Created by: BlackPipe8
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Hello, i'm very new here and hoping I have a decent profile to start off with. Can I get a review?

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ok will make another change, thanks for the input. I often find myself thinking way ahead of what the hands are typing.

Alexandria VA
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BlackPipe8,

You might want to proofread again, there are several "I" pronouns and a couple sentences that need to be capitalized appropriately.

Word usage concerns: "I have a athletic build." -- should be "an" not "a". "I am a 5' 10" and weigh 215" -- you ought lose the "a" from this sentence, or lose this extraneous sentence entirely, as your height and weight are already listed in the profile stats.

Good luck, Mrs TF3

Saint Paul MN
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Ok, thanks, I'll make changes tonite.

Alexandria VA
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Anyone?

Alexandria VA
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Hello, i'm very new here and hoping I have a decent profile to start off with. Can I get a review?

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TOPIC: Yet Another Profile Review
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