165
Would love some feedback : Swingers Discussion 208622
Busy Swingers Forum - everything you always wanted to know about swingers.
SwingLifeStyle Swingers Personal Ads. | SwingLifeStyle Swingers Clubs

Busy Swingers Forum

Everything you always wanted to know about swingers.

Create A Free Account

HELP
FORUMSSuccessful SwingingBetter ProfilesWould love some feedback
TOPIC: Would love some feedback
Created by: HisNHers223
Original Starting post for this thread:
Take a look at our profile and let us know what you think. Improvements?

GoTo Page: 1 2
 1 to 10 of 11   End
User Details are only visible to members.
Thanks to all of you who have given us your feedback! We revamped again and I'm wondering if it's far too long...or if it fills in the details that were left out before. Take another look for us?

Royal Oak MI
Username hidden
(23 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
I laughed out loud when I read about her "penchant for alliteration". I was just thinking that after the tagline and "blonde, bi and boisterous". Not many profiles do that. That's great!

Plano TX
Username hidden
(21 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
kthnx - Thank you! We will certainly update our profile as we move along and we fully intend on updating our pics on a regular basis as well. Thanks again for your thoughts.

Royal Oak MI
Username hidden
(23 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
Never consider your profile "done" always keep adding to it as time goes by. Your profile is clear , concise and well written , you are off to a great start!

Eldorado IL
Username hidden
(33 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
Hisn - I agree with TB - "kissing distance" is an excellent distance!

BTW I found the reference...*rubbing chin...Clinton, Mi...hmmmm

Jacksonville FL
Username hidden
(2271 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
TotalBabe - Silly me!

Royal Oak MI
Username hidden
(23 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
TotalBabe - Are you referring to "within kissing distance?" The His half came up with that and I agree it accurately portrays our preference! Thanks for the comment!

Royal Oak MI
Username hidden
(23 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
Just wanted to drop a quick note to thank you both for taking the time to read our profile. We like to consider ourselves writers; we wrote and edited the profile together but with just each other's feedback we are looking for some outside perspective.

As a side note Itsbeen, we buried the lead....there is a bar mentioned! ; )

Thanks again. - The Hers half of the equation

Royal Oak MI
Username hidden
(23 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
I'm relatively new and Scandle was very helpful. To get her Grade A+ on the first go around means you've got good cred!

Now where would we meet Mrs in a bar to chat her up....LOL (read their profile, it'll make sense.)

Welcome to SLS ItsBeen

Jacksonville FL
Username hidden
(2271 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
HisNHers223, welcome to the Forums. Your profile looks great to me. I can't think of a thing I would change.

Sheboygan Falls WI
Username hidden
(8933 posts)
GoTo Page: 1 2
 1 to 10 of 11   End
TOPIC: Would love some feedback