First of all, you need some confidence, and I would suggest you "fake it till you make it," not lying or being deceptive, but to add some positive comments rather than coming across so inexperienced. You do not sound sure of yourself, and confidence is a big turn on. The line about being unattached is good, but leave of the last word: NOTHING, as it isn't needed and would be read as a negative. Which it is. Avoid "never, don't, not, no, none," and any negative words. Accent the positives about yourself. You're good with your hands? leave that. Take out how you think you may have learned to be good with your hands. don't speculate. You want learning experiences, but not too many women want to be teachers...not in sexual situations. I would suggest you go to the men's section of the forum posts and read through some of those posts, also click on some of the single males and read their profiles for more ideas. Don't lie, don't deceive, but there are ways to reword your profile to sound more positive. Good luck with this. Gina

Just bumping this back up top - it seems I initially posted at a time nobody was frequenting the forums. I'd appreciate and advice anyone might have regarding my profile.

I was just here in front of the keyboard, sweeping out the inch-thick layer of dust in my inbox - and figured I'd ask for some critiquing. Couldn't hurt.
Thanks.