irony? how about the fact that you two... nevermind. first, why would they write you? they've made the hwp thing pretty clear. second, there's nothing wrong with using spaces bewteen paragraphs. let's use a little common sense shall we? just saying, use them where they are needed, not every time you want to say something. and finally, we never said ours was short. it's short compared to some, long compared to others. what i said was, say what NEEDS to be said. some NEED to say more than others depending on your preferences. we have listed the "dealbreakers" if you will. this adds length to our profile, but allows us to have a better chance of avoiding a meet with people we know for a fact we would not be interested in playing with. for us, that NEEDS to be said. agree or disagree. good times.

good job adding pics of her. the profile itself looks long, even though it isn't. take out all those extra spaces in between your points, and it will appear much shorter. when you approach the idea of a profile in the LS, you need to think as a successful marketer does in the business world. use them as your model because as Akron has pointed out in a few posts around the forums... it's all about marketing yourselves. people today have very short attention spans. whether you're talking about preachers, politicians, or a guest speaker talking to a fortune 500 company, they all know the formula for success as a public speaker. 1. say what NEEDS to be said. 2. say it as briefly as possible. 3. know when to shut up. not a bad profile at all.

You have a couple nice pics of the man but none of the lady. Second you need to change your tag line as it doesn't match what you talk about in your description. If you are not looking for more friends then you should be alittle less desriptive about what you like. And as the previous person put HWP thing is old we can see that you are, but you should only mention this once.
Good luck

What stands out to me is you say HWP 3 times, I got tired of reading it. We aren't exactly HWP so we would be unlikely to write back even if you wrote us first. It's your preference and that's cool, we have our preferences too. The rest looks ok to me but I'm easy. We'd write to you except for the HWP thing. Just my 2 cents you may be overstressing it a bit