We want to have a great profile critique away!: Swingers Discussion 177227

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We want to have a great profile critique away!: Swingers Discussion 177227

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TOPIC: We want to have a great profile - critique away!

Created by: SATX78233	The original post for this thread was deleted.

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User Details are only visible to members.	Your default profile picture should be the one in which you both are at an outdoor table, he drinking a beer and she wearing sunglasses and facing the camera/viewer. The one in which she has a black bar over her eyes is menaingless. The black bar only reveals that you are afraid of being discovered. Your profile seems to indicate you are very sociall and open about your interest, and that makes the black bar over her eyes seem to be a deceitful expression. Your sentences and ideas provide enough about you to make you interesting and worth contacting and considering. If you have good pictures that reveal your physique/figure, you don't need to be overly descriptive in your 'about you' comments. Those should be shortened. You should include where you would go, a place, a city, a venue, when you describe your interests. Be place-specific. ~~ZZ~~
Treasure Is FL			Username hidden (6106 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	OK well sorry about this - I hate replying with this kind of thing - but we have nothing to offer. We love your profile. Extremely well written, and if we were your neighbors we'd be thrilled to run across you. In the spirit of trying to find SOMETHING to say, here it is: you have only one pic of her in your profile and none of him, and the one of her - while very tasteful - does not really give a feel for what she would look like even over dinner. In reading your profile we'd say "they sound REALLY interesting, but who knows what they are like?". Want to avoid the people who write and then don't follow-through, then we'd suggest you make it easier for people to get a better sense of whether they would be attracted to you physically. Your profile - as written - rocks. Best of luck!
Hopkinton MA			Username hidden (256 post)

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TOPIC: We want to have a great profile - critique away!