A couple things immediately stood out in your profile: First, you wrote "And Please be white or Hispanic. We are by no means racist, it's just a matter of preference." Make it short and sweet: "We prefer white or Hispanic." No question about it being your preference in that regard. You don't have to apologize for someone maybe thinking you kinda sorta just possibly might be racist because you don't care to play with Zamboni drivers or one-eyed, one-horned, flying purple people eaters. Quick, simple, done. Second, the toy collection...are all her toys silent or does she have an impressive selection of toys? I thought so ;) You might want to change quiet (silent) to quite (impressive).

I get the impression you are only looking for FF play with the men watching and no swap. As a result describing your man seems superfluous.

-M

personal opinion. the profile is long due to a lot of info that really doesn't need to be shared at this point. just a couple of examples, we don't need to know what your dress size is. we can see the pics. we don't need to know about your toy collection. most ladies in this LS have them. and any statement you have to follow with, "we are by no means racist" is something you should strongly consider leaving out. why? because no matter what you say now, people will still say you're racist. you have every right to your preferences. if someone writes you and you are not interested, you just say "thanks, but we're not feeling a connection here." that covers anything you don't have a preference for. by saying it in your profile, you're opening yourself up to be judged and labeled. as i've said in other posts... 1. say what you NEED to say. 2. say it as briefly as possible. 3. know when to shut up.

Advice--Sorry

Give me you honest opinion please, what can I add or take off? I realize our add is not your typical swinging thing but surely there are couples out there that might go for this? Maybe I need to word it differently? Help :)