Too much, too little: Swingers Discussion 189807

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Too much, too little: Swingers Discussion 189807

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TOPIC: Too much, too little

Created by: 22getlaid2nite Original Starting post for this thread:
Critique?

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User Details are only visible to members.	Hi 22 : ) I didn't get to read the original....but I really like what I just read. Great profile (Table and ST always give wonderful advice). Two things I would like to suggest for your profile: 1. Highlighting "soft swap," in either red or blue. People tend to skim profiles rather than truly read them (unfortunately). This is important to where you are in the LS right now, so I would want it to grab a couple's attention. Just click on Tools over to the left at the menu bar, and then scroll all the way down and it will explain how to do this. 2. The following, which you have written at the end of your profile, is in opposition to you posting that you want soft swap and want to take your time -- "We will respond to any e-mails, and most likely any requests." The most likely any requests part. I would take that out. Very, very nice default pic (great cleavage!!). Make your other pics for public different, not another version of the first (especially if you're only offering two pics). I always say, neck down, full body (G-rated) are great. Pics of both are always appreciated : ) Best wishes, Kat
Morgantown PA			Username hidden (2965 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Wow! A few simple changes makes almost all the difference. Much better. Actually, now that you've broken out the 'not' list from everything, it reads much less negative than before. (Bonus feedback, you might consider rewriting the first section to include those 'not' items rather than having a list in your description section.) Get those other pictures posted and I'd say you've got it :)
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (467 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks to both(all) of you so far! Can you please point out some of the 'limit's we imposed? Also, we broke it up a bit so it is not so... 'blocked'.
Mansfield OH			Username hidden (7 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	First impressions: Your paragraphs are too long. Not too much info, just too long. Hard to read with your thoughts all clumped together. Rewrite them into a couple shorter paragraphs within each section to give readers a visual break. If she is bi-curious, say so in your stats, and detail her interest limits in the profile body. Be upfront rather than hiding it in the fine print. When we came to the end, we read "We will respond to any emails and most likely any requests." By that point, we have the impression you won't be interested in any requests with all the limits listed :( Try to tip your profile balance more into the positive during rewrite :) Additional photos, preferably some PG shots of both you and he. Showing multiple pics of only breasts/cleavage is highly overdone on these sites. Mr TF3
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (467 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Rare for me to say this, but I actually liked this profile a lot! Some will say it's too negative, but I belong to the school of saying what you want and don't want and getting less mail. Others would prefer more mail and then having to reject lots of people they don't want to meet. If you've read the forums, you'll also see lots of comments about whether experienced couples should meet with newbie couples, and what it means if you aren't willing to play on the first date. You should at least be familiar with those discussions. If there was anything I would suggest improving, it would be your pics. First, since the woman in a couple often has the final say in whether to meet you or not, you should have a pic of your male. Second, if you're only going to have two pics, I wouldn't do body parts closeups. I'd rather see full body shots, clothed or unclothed, with your faces averted if you want to protect your privacy.
Kitty Hawk NC			Username hidden (163 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Critique?
Mansfield OH			Username hidden (7 post)

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TOPIC: Too much, too little