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I agree with Annie, I found your profile a "cumbersome" read. I did in fact read the whole thing, because I wanted to give you an honest reply here, but if not for that fact, I wouldn't have. If I had encountered your profile through a search, I would have likely passed it by after a few lines.

I think you've said a lot of good things in there, not things to be thrown away, for sure, but take the time to make it a little more personal and friendly, as opposed sort of sterile and clinical, the way it reads now.

Hope that helps a bit...

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