I didn't see what it looked like previously but it looks pretty good to me. I would say though don't be surprised if people ask you what you like as you don't really mention it. But, hey that's why we chat and get to know each other. To be honest even with listed preferences we have people contact us and ask so what do you like and what are you looking for?

Thanks for the help. I just changed it and took out a lot of the things you said and a little other. I think I was trying to put too much info and other crap in it just to make it look better.

We are just new to this type of thing and the lifestyle as well and would like to know how we could improve our profile. Thanks for any suggestions.