Suggestions for improvement: Swingers Discussion 205341

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TOPIC: Suggestions for improvement

Created by: RichieRidiculous Original Starting post for this thread:
Just looking for some feedback to improve my profile. Let me know what you think!

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User Details are only visible to members.	Richie, just an additional word tweak: You say "extenuates". From the context, I think you mean "accentuates"...
Trenton MI			Username hidden (105 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	I've made the suggested edits and I think my profile is improved because of it! Thank you again for taking the time! I'm glad you enjoyed my lingerie fantasy, I can see by your pictures that you weren't kidding about having a closet full of outfits! Too bad you're all the way in Florida, I would love to see you in them! Rich
Hampton Bays NY			Username hidden (3 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thank you so much for your comments! I like your suggestions and I am going to update my profile accordingly. Thank you again, for taking the time to review my profile and make polite constructive comments. Happy swinging!
Hampton Bays NY			Username hidden (3 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	RichieRidiculous, welcome aboard! Make yourself at home, enjoy reading, posting, and have fun along the way! I found your profile quite a pleasant read :) Thank you for including clear face and body pictures! You are well ahead of many single men. Ahead of some couples and single women too! And even more thanks for NOT having those dreaded self-taken bathroom mirror shots with the toilet in the background, lol. A few negative points I noticed: "In this area its hard to meet the same open minded people, especially if you are a single male. Unfortunately there is the single male stigma that means a male just wants to have sex and be done with it. I have the sex already...". I would remove this part. You do deserve the credit for expressing your frustration in a very polite way, but nevertheless, it is still bitching, lol. And a little confusing. Since it is so hard for you to meet people, being a single male, how do you "have the sex already"? You see what I am saying? A few typos, like "finding a like minded..." (remove the "a"), also here, "who are willing [...] and is willing" (change the "is" to "are"), a few lets, its, where the apostrophe is missing, a few missing commas here and there, but this is not high school, just things I had noticed, while reading your profile. The tone of your profile indicates, you are looking mainly for the social part of the lifestyle. Nothing wrong with that, but some people might feel you want to hang out, but when it comes DTF, you might not follow through. However, you have to do what makes you happy, and if socializing is the ultimate fantasy, then do just that :) Now, if there are a few bedroom fantasies you want to act upon, maybe you want to mention them? Totally up to you. On the humorous note: Do not complain about lack of clubs parties... Try living in my area, lol. Actually, social aspect of the lifestyle here has been more prominent recently. Just a little while back, this area was like a swinging desert :) Just sayin' :) I must say, your lingerie fantasy woke up all the butterflies in my stomach. OMG, it would be my fantasy to be showered in lingerie, lol! It is actually a good thing, that you are so far away, because I absolutely do not have anymore room in my closet for anymore lingerie! Good luck and have fun!
Panama City Beach FL			Username hidden (1927 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Just looking for some feedback to improve my profile. Let me know what you think!
Hampton Bays NY			Username hidden (3 post)

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TOPIC: Suggestions for improvement