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TOPIC: Suggestions-Comments
Created by: lmt101
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I wanted to take a minute to ask for some constructive criticism on our profile.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!
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Can't see pics, but that's ok. As for the content, there are a lot of negative words like "we are not..." and "No..." While it is important to state your boundaries clearly, sometimes a profile with too many "no" and "not" and what you are NOT looking for is perceived as negative, with maybe a bad experience or so...

Not fair, exactly, but you want to come up with some positives to highlight, rather than just what you do not want.

You write well, clear and well-spoken, so tweaking it a bit shouldn't be a problem.

Good luck,
Gina
San Antonio TX
 
 
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looks good to me
Niagara Falls NY
 
 
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I wanted to take a minute to ask for some constructive criticism on our profile.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!
Crown Point IN
 
 
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TOPIC: Suggestions-Comments