Good job w/ moving stuff around. An appealing profile.

Good luck!
Gina

Thanks for catching the spell errors. Those are fixed.
Move some things around, believe we got her done. Hehe
Sarah

I would recommend moving your don't wants (negatives) to the end of the sections, showing off your likes/wants (positives) first :)

Also, drop your reference to "the Hoo." Mentioning off-site chat/mail services in your profile can get your profile taken offline for violating SLS's TOS.

Mr TF3

"head over heels" instead of "heals"

"doubt" not dought

"parties" not party's

The best part of your profile is your description of each other. The weakest parts are those that sound like everyone else's profile. "She is shy at first..." etc.

Good luck and have a great time with this,
G.

Thank you so much MrsT3. It really means alot. Now to wait and see what happens.
LOL
Thanks Again,
Dreams

Much better than the first time I read it :) I'd suggest breaking the first section into a couple smaller paragraphs, one covering single females, one covering couples, and your one line statement for the single guys (or guys from a couple that think they can get you to change your mind because they are part of a couple playing alone) that can't get a clue from your not having an interest bar showing in the males category. Some items presently in the first section, like your family time constraints and club activities, would be better suited in other parts of your profile -- activities in the third section (experiences) section, constraints in the last (what else we'd like to say) section. One mixed message in serious need of clarification: protection. In the first section, you said "condoms are a must," then in the second section you proclaimed him as "Safe"..."one more thing you don't have to worry about." Were you really intending the message of the visiting man has to use condoms, but your man doesn't with visiting women? As such, any protection afforded by condom use is lost; there's really no point in either man wearing them, other than as birth control for you. Mrs TF3

Updated and re-worded. Would like to know how it sounds now.
Thanks
Dreams

Kevbon.

I would have never thought about that line of "spicing our lives up." being taken that way. Thank you so much. We will be re-wording that for sure. Thanks for the help.
Dreams

Hi Dreams I think TF3 has offered some excellent advice. One thing i would like to mention is about clarity in what you want to say. How you "word" a thought can often times be misread. You mention that you are an adventurous couple, so I hope you this is just the next step together in sexual exploration. However you then state that you "have been trying to spice up your relationship". This is a red flag line for us. We personally won't contact a couple when we read this, if only to keep ourselves out of someone elses drama. I hope this helps, and believe me, not one of the better profiles on this or any site was jotted down on a whim, the good ones all took thought and time. Good luck in your search for fun :) Kevin & Bonnie

Thanks for the help.