I liked the story of how you got into the lifestyle...makes you more personal and real.

Much better. Adding additional pictures and poses always helps, looking forward to seeing them.

Only negative thing that jumps out this time is the inclusion of external contact info in your last paragraph. That's a big no-no by the SLS rules!

Good luck :)

Thank you both for the replies. I did quite an overhaul on the page. Deleting older photos and writing all sections over several times. Not sure if it is better or worse now.

Going to try and find the time to shoot some new photos may even try and get a friend to help me out instead of using the remote this time.

Just as BiFYork hit the "I" over use on the head, Mrs TF3 was put off by your initial "similar interests" statement -- too generic, too overused by hundreds of other profiles. We're thinking you ought expand the opening statement to include two to four interests you would like your reader to have, making a connection with them early on, pulling yourself out of the "similar interests" pack.

Our best advice for anyone on SLS is read your profile aloud, pretending it is a stranger's profile. Revise the parts that don't work for you, rinse, repeat.

Good luck, Mr TF3 :)

Thank you Gina, I believe I got the photo you were talking about there were actually 3 blue shirts so I may be mistaken. As far as content goes that is exactly the type of advice I was looking for. No matter how many times you write something over and over again the small details never stand out, but jump at others.

For the most part, a very well-written and appealing profile. I would consider deleting the pic of you in the blue shirt, as maybe it's the background, but it doesn't flatter you...the angle, the non-smile. The others are just fine. You have almost all "I" statements. Maybe you could add a few things that interest you in women you'd like to meet. Do you have a preference? Even if you just change one or two statements so that they don't start with the word "I," it would help also. Such as your interest in photography. Or ask a general question, perhaps, like "Are you interested in photography or in being photographed?" I know I'm not much help here...it's late, and I should be sleeping, but if you want to improve upon your profile, that's the only areas that I would suggest any change. Even so, your profile seems fine without any change. Good luck in your search, Gina

I have been on this site for a while, but for various reasons have not been extremely active. Thanks to some recent changes I am looking to get more involved in the site and back into the lifestyle. I would greatly appreciate any help in improving my profile. Thanks in advance.