I've been approving profiles for the last week or so and the majority of them are, well, atrocious. TN, your profile is well-written but, as someone else pointed out, wordy and doesn't address your dislikes, preferred partners, etc. The length of it would make people stop reading after the first paragraph and I think the trick is to condense it down to the essentials you think a woman or couple really needs to know. Everything else is just gravy...

Well, I have to say that I just loved your profile, every well-written word of it. I think, if there is anything at all to add, it would be a little bit about what kind of women/couples you are attracted to most, as you say nothing about what you do NOT like. While I may fit the line about the plump booty, I have no idea at all if I would be in your range of preferences, for example. So, honey, just a bit about what kind of person turns you on would be helpful to those who are thinking of emailing but are passing it by because they're not sure if you would like them. Other than that, a very good profile. More pics please. Good luck in the lifestyle, and it's nice to read a mature, confident, funny and laid back profile. Gina

Thanks for the tips. Anyone else?

TN, your profile tells me you have alot of experience in the lifestyle and that you are very confident in your appearance and in what you want. I can see how this might be intimidating to some. Remeber, you are putting yourself out there for the Mr. , as well as the Mrs. to approve.
The profile seems a bit wordy. I did take the time to read its intireity. Some things are better left unsaid until asked, or face to face with your date.

Mrs. Hedo

As a single guy, I know I'm fighting an uphill battle here, but so far I've had pretty good luck with the people I've met in the lifestyle. However, nobody ever sends me any mail through here. I recently rewrote my profile to try and give people a better idea of who I am and what I like. Personally, I'm afraid it's too wordy and not sexual enough. If anyone would take a look at it and offer advice, I would really appreciate it.