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Your first bit of constructive criticism: set yourself apart from the other lazy single males by not piggybacking on the thread of another. I say lazy because you have only one picture on your profile that isn't taken by you pointing your cellphone at a mirror, and that one is a webcam...are you kidding us? Turned me off to even bothering to read your profile. But I digress. MikeMakis asked first, this is his thread. You want help with your profile, get serious about it and start your own thread :)

Mrs TF3

I would also welcome any "constructive criticism on my profile.

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Thank you very much for the response! I took your suggestions and did a little touching up and expanding. I like it better myself, now. =)

I should probably clarify about the age thing. I became sexually active at 16 with another 16 year old, so it wasn't illegal at all. I can definitely see your point, though. That probably wasn't really helpful to mention.

Anyway, I would still like feedback on the changes I made. Questions, comments, concerns, and suggestions are all very much welcome!

very nice profile. Two things stand out though: the use of the word "love" is scary for most in the lifestyle (I say most, not all) and you may want to rethink that one. The other is listing the age range of your experiences. Sixteen is underage and also would be off-putting, especially for a couple who may have children in that age bracket. Not everyone is so open minded as you might expect on a swing site. You will find a lot of judgmental and uptight people on here, but you will also find very welcoming, fun, laid back people too who will be quite attracted to you. That said, you obviously write well. It's refreshing to me to read a well-written, grammatically correct profile where you state yourself honestly and openly and eloquently. Your pictures are great. You portray yourself consistently in both profile and pictures. That will be appreciated. You state a lot about yourself, and only one real desire (to experience male/male sexuality), but you don't necessarily state any female or couple preferences as to anything other than an age range. That may scare off a few couples, or intimidate them a bit from making first contact. I like your profile. I would only consider making a couple of very small changes to it to broaden your scope a bit. Good luck, although you will not need luck. Gina

I guess it goes without saying that single males have something of an uphill climb towards acceptance in the swinger community. There is a nasty stigma and it doesn't seem like there is a lot of opportunity to overcome it.

I'm trying to get my feet wet with this kind of alternative lifestyle, and it's proving difficult because I am young and single. I'd some feedback on how I am presenting myself - profile, pictures, that kind of thing.

So, basically, feel free to critique my profile. Be as forward as possible, so long as it is constructive.

Thanks.