your profile looks good here but you mite wanna redefine your age preference i mean really how many 99 year olds do you see swinging lol

Reading your profile, it's pretty good. You have a few grammatical problems, but over all you sound fun - and have great pics & certs. I think you mean sex is about desire and being totally uninhibited (not "inhibited" ;^) You mention you are "selective" three times, is that because you're tired of ugly ducklings contacting you? (LOL! ;^) Nobody likes rejection, and you wouldn't want someone you think is hot to be afraid she won't be good enough for you. Say it once - keep the last one.

Ohh yes...the orange shirt picture is yummy. Put that one as your default...yum.

I thought you were a stud, am I wrong??
Oh SNAP!
Shelly

I think the profile is very good. The revisions are very nice, and I like that the red is gone as well. The pics are nice, I do agree about the black shorts pic. With legs like yours you don't need the hand down the pants....I would take a pic with no shirt on (you work hard for those abs babe, show em off) and the black shorts, showing how toned your legs are. I like the jeans pic, but again...I'd show more chest on it. I love how your hands are very clean and taken care of (we women look at shit like that lol), but don't like the hand in the pants. I know you have a penis, and like a previous woman said, we like imagining OUR hand in there...but definately leave them unbuttoned for the pic. Shoulders are very sexy, so I would have a shot going from your neck to your legs...like alot of mine are. The orange shirt, well we don't have to discuss that pic. Thats a good one. LOL. Other than that it looks good. The certs speak for themselves, so you don't have to tell anyone what a stud you are. Shelly

I guess I'm just "dumb," but I still think the pic with the black shorts looks a bit painful. If I were just glancing over your profile, it's hard to tell exactly what you're showing in that one. Is it possible to get a shot of just you in those shorts without more to show? Your legs look great and we wouldn't mind seeing more of them!

Much better!

would delete the pussy poem/rhythme in the beginning. sure u think it's funny and it may be but some woman may just not like it..

Dear certified,

Yours is a profile we would probably pass on. First and foremost, you emphasize your sexual conquests way too much. Your certifications speak for themselves, and prove you are accomplished. Put in more about your hobbies outside the bedroom.

Another reason is that YOU use CAPITAL letters to emphasize. We can put in emphasis ourselves, without being yelled at.

And lastly, in the last sentence, 'hear' should be spelled 'here.'

You do have a great sense of humor, and some great points in your profile.

Good luck.

"red in a profile is a turn OFF color" is what I actually meant to write, sorry.