I would definitely put your descriptions of each other towards the beginning of your profile, as those are very sexy and positive statements. There are too many exclamation points, which reads as if you are trying to make an accute point with almost every statement. Those should be used judiciously.

Start with positve statements, and leave the "no" portions or the "then we are not the couple for you" statements at a minimum.

Good luck and have fun!
G.