We would like to thank everyone for their comments. We will definitely take them into account when we redo our profile.

Ok...readdressing the profile. You have GREAT pictures. Very nicely done. The bike comment is fine, I don't know why I thought it sounded negative. You do say "we have no interest..." twice towards the beginning. that might be better placed towards the middle or elsewhere. She states she has "no tattoos, but..." Why not just write that she would like to get a tattoo, and leave it as a tease? The statements: "felt like an outsider" and "try again"...negatives that sound tentative about the lifestyle itself. You can say that you have limited experience with clubs and would like to gain more, instead of putting yourself on the outside. The words "unfortunately" and "limited luck" are also negative. Turn it into just a statement about your experience and interests. You don't have to give the negative details or commentary, just state it as a fact. I hope this is taken as gentle help. It is intended as such. Gina

Hi. You have what sounds to be a lot of "negatives" in your profile, lack of confidence, whatever you want to term it. But the suggestion to read it out loud is a good one.

For example, the Harley riding, you state you enjoy it, but say it's not a requirement. Okay, the word "not" is a negative. Also,that you've had "no luck." That's a lack of confidence statement that will sound off putting rather than honest.

I hope this makes sense. I need to read it again and actually jot down what stands out.

Small changes, not glaring ones. Good luck!
Gina

Same thoughts here, rework that first paragraph as WesternPA described. Then read it out loud to each other as if it were a profile belonging someone else, just to catch and correct any little "that's not us" details only you two would catch. Good luck!

It's a very good profile.

The only change I would make it to be a little more personable in the first paragraph. I don't think you mean to, but you come off a bit rules-oriented and not fun-oriented.

Good luck!

Hi all,

We would like some help with our profile. We are always looking for open-minded friends. But lately we have been very busy and have had little time to actually meet people.

We know we should have some more pictures of him. Those are being worked on. But once again, time has been short for awhile.

Could someone please help?

Jeff & Sue