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Created by: xenricox
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I see im getting quick the views but i don't think im delieving my message correctly. if you some time please check it out and reply here or email me with your advice

thank you

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I was hoping that TF3's reply was a bit harsh, but no, it was, if anything, understated.

Your basic message -- I want you to enjoy what we do as much or more than I do -- is fine. But you're right. Your delivery totally ruins it. Take what TF3 said very seriously!

- ST

Kitty Hawk NC
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For starters, your pictures don't do much for you. Dump your hairy belly webcam pics, they look like crap. Have a friend take some better PG pictures of you having fun, save the topless or semi-nudes for your private gallery. Avoid cellphone, self-portraits and mirror shots at all cost.

Rewrite your profile to separate yourself from other single males. Having a basic grasp of grammar will go a long way in that respect. Speaking of respect, avoid using the word tits unless you are still in high school. Your incomplete sentences, improperly conjugated words (example: plural of life is lives, not lifes) and capitalization issues tell us you didn't proofread.

Good luck and welcome to SLS.

Saint Paul MN
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I see im getting quick the views but i don't think im delieving my message correctly. if you some time please check it out and reply here or email me with your advice

thank you

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TOPIC: Review my profile

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