Looking at your second section, break it up for smoother reading, and add in the (slightly edited) paragraph from section one. Also, notice the lack of info on him...try to expand and expound, unless his only job is sitting on the sidelines holding the camera. ***Start Example*** She is a unique mix of Ukrainian and Asian, 5'2" (5'8" with her usual choice of 6" f-me heels on!), pierced B-cups, shaved, and a multiple squirter and bi with the right girl, with the most luscious bubble butt ever! It is not necessary that the female half of the couple be bi, just an added bonus. He is athletic build, has clean shaved body, pierced nipples, cut with nice package. We are VERY real. Not pic collectors or online chatters. We are here to meet, hang out, make friends, and have some great fun along the way! We don't have hard and fast rules, (except for always playing safe,) but we have learned what works the best for us. Lately we have been throwing house parties and love it! ***End Example***

The first section is clunky, not a smooth read. Your information isn't the problem, just the presentation. Move your first paragraph to the second section, where it belongs, and paginate the rest with smooth flow in mind, like this: ***Start example*** Couples: We prefer experienced full swap couples. We are open to pretty much anyone as long as you are open minded and take care of yourself. Single guys: We like MFM. She likes above average guys (you know who you are), and prefer under 40 (unless you ARE one of those guys who doesn't look his age). Single girls: We like all shape and sizes. We are great if you have never done it before as we are experienced, laid back and respect all your boundaries. ***End Example*** I've added the missing word "are" to your single guys detail, used CAPS to flag it for you. Consider rewording your single girls detail. First, try "gals" or "women" instead of "girls", given girls usually implies prepubescent females... And the "We are great if you have never done it before as we are experienced..." portion can give the impression you are only good when you play with new females, avoiding other experienced members that would know better about how good you really are...I doubt that is the message you want to deliver :) Now to look closely at your other sections...

Thanks all! With 100 degrees here San Diego sounds great lol.

Or Dallas?

spacibo (damn forum wont accept cyrillic characters)

-M

It's short, sweet and to the point. The only reason not to like it is if the reader doesn't fit into your criteria.

So.....when are you guys heading to San Diego? lol

I like it! To the point and gives enough information about both of you to weed out the non-profile readers out there.

Thanks!