Ready for a critique: Swingers Discussion 201349101

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Ready for a critique: Swingers Discussion 201349101

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TOPIC: Ready for a critique

Created by: bicouplefun2012 Original Starting post for this thread:
I've been working on our profile. Seems kinda long but contains all the important information I think. What's more important is what you guys think. What needs to be kept, cut, changed. Thanks in advance!!

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User Details are only visible to members.	It is part of our rules we made for this. We always play as a couple. Im not with another man & he doesn't penetrate another woman. Think what u want, this is what works for us.
Amarillo TX			Username hidden (22 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Your husband is the one who doesn't want to fuck another hot sexy woman?
Avondale LA			Username hidden (4496 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	I've changed the profile now. I agree with repeated items. I am OCD when it comes to spelling though and performed spell check on my computer plus using the sites' and it corrected problems before I posted. From what I can tell there are several versions of swing & ours is a version soft swing. As my husband gets more comfortable our rules may change but for now it is what it is. Thanks for all advice.
Amarillo TX			Username hidden (22 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Akron , I agree with the misspelling but trying to define a swinger is about as useful as trying to figure out what a women is thinking.......hopeless. Everyone makes their own definition. ;) Mrs Sav
Weaver AL			Username hidden (4012 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Many misspellings, run on sentences, repeated comments, concepts that are standards (i.e. good hygiene). This whole penetration issue seems to be a real concern. It's almost like you're not really swingers. Good luck.
Avondale LA			Username hidden (4496 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	It comes down to how patient you are. Since it's about supply/demand issue, your marketing should be crisp. Weed out during the meet and greet; which will be few and far between anyways. focus on how fun you are, don't repeat yourself, and give the reader a hook. You pamper a FWB...got an example? I'd ditch all the restrictions. Why? People are lazy and rarely read everything. After the 3rd item most folks get bored and move on to the profile offering naked bungee jumping. Since you're not new (only your husband), perhaps focus on how you want to take your experience and bring him in to the LS. Make it out like an adventure and that you need a partner. Play innocent and get invited to parties and clubs to mingle. This would expand your opportunities, in my opinion. Lastly, I'm going to be frank...a lot of girls like dick. Not a toy. Not a hand. Not a mouth. But hard cock. To flat out say your playmate can't get penetrated...you've really narrowed your field. Give that some thought. Pics are nice. Tasteful. Your writing is solid with only a couple of typos. You're clearly smart and forthright. All good qualities. Hope that helps and good luck on your adventure!
Roswell GA			Username hidden (105 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Just did a quick look. So a couple points just solely my opinion. Bicouple....immediately says to me "both bi" Since you are only looking for bi single women. Which we have never managed to find one in many years on half a dozen sites. I wish you luck but understand that you are looking for the same thing as EVERYONE else and are competing with EVERYONE else for the maybe 1 in 100 REAL single women that may be online looking for a couple. Looking for that.....I think you have a lot more words and restrictions in your profile than you need to. Your profile would be good if you are looking for single men. Because you will be flooded with responses and want to try to "weed out" a bunch of them. But looking for single women. There are just not enough of them to need a "sorting process" before you even chat. I think if you are lucky enough to find a unicorn or so, that the profile is so wordy an restrictive, she would pass because she has 100 emails in her box begging for her to meet anywhere anytime no questions asked. I hope you take this as just my perspective and opinion and I didnt come across as rude. Youre just dealing with a tiny tiny supply. An overwhelming demand, and then putting restrictions on that supply.
Mount Juliet TN			Username hidden (662 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	I've been working on our profile. Seems kinda long but contains all the important information I think. What's more important is what you guys think. What needs to be kept, cut, changed. Thanks in advance!!
Amarillo TX			Username hidden (22 post)

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TOPIC: Ready for a critique