Wool...Welcome to the forums! Regarding your profile.... Good pics, you may try adding more of Mr. and/or the two of you together for balance. Perhaps add some of you two in a venue outside of your home, ie someplace you like to go or doing things you enjoy. First and foremost...Some color used for emphasis can be useful, but a whole profile in color (not to mention the all caps, words in bold, the asterisks, and over use of the exclamation points!!!!!!!!!) can be distracting and make the ideas you are trying to emphasize, get lost in the clutter. Try paring down to one (or even two) color(s) or creative use of the color and lose some of the excess punctuation. We happen to dislike the use of 4 in place of the word for and u in place of the word you, etc. Obviously this is a matter more of taste but not sure what pupose they serve when the rest of your profile is actually written. Reading your profile I would say that it is good you know what you want. I think you can state things once and leave it at that. eg we only play together, no sideliners, etc. really means the same thing so why repeat it? You say you are looking for people you will 'enjoy before and after.' If that is meant to convey the friends with bennies approach to the lifestyle, you may want to expound on things you enjoy doing aside from sex. Lastly, phrases like "move on," and 'don't bother' come across negatively, almost giving the picture that there is some drama associated with you or your experiences. Not really sure what purpose they serve as the idiots will ignore those comments anyway and you may actually scare away people that look for others who are upbeat and positive. You're attractive and seem to know what you want I'm sure you'll have plenty of success, so take my suggestions just as food for thought. All the best!

You need to do a spell check. Obviously, you're more intelligent and clever than your spelling lead me to believe (I never use it, btw, the snob in me, I guess). And yes, they're right when they say that the angle of the female picture could be better...looking down or straight on is more flattering for some reason. That's true for most of us.

I would also suggest leaving out all the STD details...you can simply say you're disease-free and leave it at that. Tighten some lines, relax a bit, and you guys should do fine. Breaks in paragraphs are also pleasing to the eye and lead to being read more also.

Gina

I agree with prior posts. Also, if you are considering another pic of the Mrs.-use another angle....the pic seems to be shot from a looking up angle......not the most flattering.

I would give the profile itself a 7. Its interesting and has humor, which catches the attention. I would break it up a little bit so it doesn't look like one very long paragraph. Also, tell us more about what you are into. As far as the pics go. Personally I do not prefer fully nude pics, I prefer people to use imagination in their pics. Maybe a few of you in some pretty lingerie.
But overall I did like it.
ShellY