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Overall not bad yet fine tuning points might be considered. It reads so much like the only author is the male. (And third person writing) i.e. He's... instead of I am.... All was fairly well OK until the "She's got a great ass". Just seem a bit vulgar based on the overall writings. People assume that there is an ass and it is probably not of the type that Bella Abzug would have or you would not be posting here. Simply put a "Great physique" would have been more in the context with the rest of the text. Still far better than most and if a little bit less mechanical then it would be pretty good for a first cut.

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Awesome profile. In the section about describing your fantasies you appear to have skipped a word:

"If we told you everything now it would [ruin?] all the fun."

At least I'm guessing that ruin is the word you intended....or something similar. I'm sure most people automatically insert a word and don't even realize it. I know I did the first time through. But I read profiles at least twice to help catch any minor errors like that.

All in all, your profile kicks ass. Well written and very sexy pics. What more could you ask for?

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We have spent a lot of time creating our profile to accurately show and describe who we are and what we are looking for. We have kids and a business so we do not publicly post any face pics. Would appreciate any comments

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Don't really know if others perceive it that way, but it's something that I take notice to. I very well could be in the minority on this one. The pics you have are great, btw.

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Yup, good profile. I'm just nit picking here, but I'm almost always suspicious of a couples profile if there isn't at least 1 pic of the couple together. Probably because of having dealt with single guys posing as a couple and using pics of a friend, or an ex, or in one case that I'm certain of, pics of a random girl he found online.

So yeah, that's my 2 cents. Really good profile from a really good looking couple.

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