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TOPIC: READY FOR EXPERIENCED CRITIQUING
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Not sure it will make any difference, but we would still like to hear any thoughts, comments or suggestions some more experienced l/s ers might have to say about our profile.
Thx, Rob & Bel Chaemeleon |
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Well, you give an awful lot of information. There are a few typo's in it that should be corrected.
As I was reading it I was struck by the negativity. We WON'T do this. You MUST do that. You don't make it sound like you'd be a very fun couple to be with. I'd completely rewrite it, focusing on what you would like to have, rather than on all the hurdles you feel prospective playmates need to jump. |
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Not sure it will make any difference, but we would still like to hear any thoughts, comments or suggestions some more experienced l/s ers might have to say about our profile.
Thx, Rob & Bel Chaemeleon |
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