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Created by: forherpleasure50
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Would really appreciate a critique of our profile-you can never have too much(constructive) feedback...

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A lot of people move from Memphis to Atlanta area...

Many thanks for the thoughtful comments esp regarding photos. These are good and really pretty easy fixes. The writing part we'll add some personality to.

Great stuff-Thanks and we hope you have a great holiday week also. I&P

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Welcome to SLS and the forums!

(and hello from someone born in Memphis)

Overall: very clear what you want and very clear you put time in to the lady's photos. Takeaways: nice, experienced middle-aged couple with attractive lady who know what they want and travel.

Still don't know what we'd write about to prove we read your profile other than "we're going to be in New Orleans". Not much about the guy.

Photos: Good photos of the lady, but could add some variety. Don't all have to be bedroom photos. What about activities? Photos of the two of you doing something you enjoy (dinner, bikes, beach, NOLA) would be good.

And definitely not enough photos of the man.

Profile: Well written and clear. A bit generic, but that's not uncommon. Consider adding some other specifics beyond your travel. Do you enjoy Memphis in May? Golf? play tennis? Go hiking at Shelby Forest? Good profiles have hooks where the writer can say "Oh wow, we enjoy Shelby Forest too! Do you make it to the bluffs?" or something like that.

Hope these thoughts help! Enjoy your holiday week!

J&K

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Would really appreciate a critique of our profile-you can never have too much(constructive) feedback...

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