I think you have a great start and that you just need to buff a few things up. 1. I'd try a different headline, one that will let people know a bit abut you up front. Something like, "Soft Swap Couple Seeks FWBs" 2. We assume that you are fun to be around, you don't need to say it. Also, I think you only need to mention if you *are* 420 friendly. I would drop that line and if you feel you must, bring it up when you meet someone. 3. Under your description, group everything about your physical description together in one paragraph and everything about what you like to do together in another; right now it;s all sort of mixed together in one paragraph. 4. Under the "Our fantasies and/or real experiences" section, you say, "We don't share our fantasy's with the whole world, only with people we feel comfortable with." That comes across as kind of harsh. I might change it to something like, "We'll share that when we meet you face to face ;) " It says the same thing but is a little less brusque. Good luck and I hope you find this helpful!

We think it's alright except for one thing. The line were you say you have a lot of rules, that makes us feel like we would have to jump thru hoops just to meet you. We have rules also, but if everthing is a good match and there's a attraction, we will tell them in a email what we don't want. We don't really call them rules, just what we want and don't want or will and won't do.

hello everyone. We are new and could use some constructive criticism. Thanks in advance:)