You're polite in your profile, and maybe a bit too much so (sorry but true). There are repeitive words such as the word "play" overused, and maybe you can come up with substitutes for that, or tighten up your paragraphs a bit. "whether" instead of "weather" Watch your use of the word: You're. You're great in the first half of the sentence, but revert back to "your" in the second half of the same sentence, when it should be "you're." I suggest to many to read your profile out loud in front of a mirror. If it reads pretty well out loud, it will sound ok in print. maybe something in your tagline about the head in the window would be an attention getter! "Who's that knockin' at my door" or "AGHHH a peeping WHO???" something off-beat gets attention, and that picture gets attention, so why not make the most of it? Good luck, Gina

I told him he had some big headed person looking in his window.

Ok .....I think your profile is fine. Can't see where you need to change it. Good luck in your search.

JoAnn

Wow, only one reply. I guess that could be a good thing or a bad thing, lol
Thanks for your input twoforone, hope to get a few more responses.

you should smile more. Other than that you should email the couple that are looking for you. Other than that the profile is fine. Patrick pattie

Hi everyone, just wanted some honest opinions about my profile and pics. I have already met some great people from this site, but am curious to see what people think. Do I need to make any changes? Am I someone you would want to meet if you looked at my profile and pics? I think i'm one of the few singles who are here for the right reasons and am just looking to get to know more people. P.S. I already know getting a gf or lady to participate with me would be a tremendous help, LOL Thanks for any replies! Nate