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The part about not caring if your partner is cheating is kind of off putting. Makes it sound like you're just looking for a piece of ass, not to mention that it makes us question your ethos. If you really don't care, that's on you. But I wouldn't advertise it.


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Get some certs and you should be very successful, especially with that accent!

Virginia Beach VA
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While I can't view your profile, good grammar speaks volumes.

Because nobody wants to talk to someone who can't annunciate or properly spacewordswithoutlookinglikeanidiot because its bad I sound like a moron now getthepoint??

It really irritates me when someone has very little grammar, or lacking in the grammatical structure department. Even moreso when its both.

Lastly, many people do not realize that their writing skills are a natural extension of their speaking skills. E.G. if you can't communicate on paper, you'll do the same with speaking.

Best wishes in your endeavors. :-)

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First thing, lose that bogus warning. Unenforceable and screams drama. As a single male, the last thing you want to do is leave readers with the impression you bring drama to the party.

The rest of your profile has good information but the lack of commas results in run-on sentences making for a very confusing read until you get to the period unless you've lost interest in reading further somewhere along the way. By way of example, I'm suggesting you proofread for punctuation.

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TOPIC: Profile advice
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