In addition to the other suggestions... Consider who is "speaking" as you write. Your profile starts off as both, then the voice changes to him mid paragraph, then back to both. In a later section, you are writing as a couple, then jump mid paragraph to her voice. I'm left wondering if it is 'we said, he said or she said' as I read. Try breaking any change of voice into a new paragraph to reduce confusion. Plus, he or she can use the additional space to expand on their own swinging desires and preferences ;) Yahoo ID -- or any external website or contact info -- is not permitted in profiles. Recommend you remove any mention of it in your next revision. Good luck, Mrs TF3 :)

ok just a few suggestions: "will further make it even more erotic" ....further just doesn't seem to fit for me. I found the sentence wordy. In the first paragraph you said you were a team and always play together but then later you mention separate rooms as a possibility. Those two thoughts are disjointed and should be in the same sentence to clarify what you mean. I think it means you won't play separately but separate rooms when you are both playing is ok. You require condoms because you fully swap....I would not elaborate. You don't need a reason here. Just specify condoms required and leave it at that. Anyone on here does not need an explanation. You apologized for the pic...ok but you do need a better one...not only is it fuzzy but it's not very flattering. From what I could tell it should be easy to do better. Yes it's that important. Lots of visual people in this world. Take care and have fun. Oldfriend

Any other advice on our profile?

Ok, we got rid of that part because we definitely don't want to offend anybody.

Yeah, i guess it could be perceived as that but we're not racist by any means. Its just my wife doesn't want to play outside our race sexually. Do you think I just need to erase that part?

Could someone please look at our profile and let us know what you think. We're not having a lot of luck right now and we're just curious if its our profile or just something else. We need some pics of us to replace our blurry one that we cropped from a group picture but not sure if that's it or not. Any help is greatly appreciated.