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Created by: pandgloops Original Starting post for this thread:
We've had our profile up for a few weeks now, and though we don't feel it's bad, we're sure that it could use some improvements. First of all being photos, of course, which we are on top of. What else could it use? Does it read well? We've gotten a pretty fair amount of responses, and have had the pleasure of meeting a few people from the site. That being said there is always room for improvement, so if anyone would be able and willing to help with suggestions it would be great and definitely appreciated. Thanks in advance to all of you Purple and Green Loops

Created by: pandgloops
Original Starting post for this thread:

We've had our profile up for a few weeks now, and though we don't feel it's bad, we're sure that it could use some improvements. First of all being photos, of course, which we are on top of. What else could it use? Does it read well?

We've gotten a pretty fair amount of responses, and have had the pleasure of meeting a few people from the site. That being said there is always room for improvement, so if anyone would be able and willing to help with suggestions it would be great and definitely appreciated.

Thanks in advance to all of you
Purple and Green Loops

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User Details are only visible to members.	Thank all three of you guys very much for your feedback. We will sit down and give it a little polishing up per your suggestions.
Concord NC			Username hidden (8 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Fun_Ahoy gave some good feedback on your first section and photos, I'll build on that... Not much in your second section to set you apart from the crowd. On swing sites, everyone is fun loving, highly sexual, attractive, with oral being their best skill. Recommend you flesh out your descriptions/interests. In your third section, what are some of your several fantasies? Do you really mean for "just please no drama or jealousy" to sound like an option? Tell people you want "drama-free" in your first section and be done with it. Your fourth section tells a reader you haven't taken the time to update your profile since signing up, as you clearly have added since then -- "I apologize in advance for the lack of photos on our profile." Lesson here is when you update your profile, update your profile :) Good luck, TF3
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (467 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Hey Loops: You have a nice profile, but things can always be tightened up. At the risk of being presumptuous, consider the following for your first section: "We are interested in local couples and single females who would like to join us in fun activities that build a relationship, leading to full-swap fun once everyone becomes comfortable. Please note that our interest in women is limited to those who are bisexual, or at the very least, those open to exploring. Neither of us is reluctant about this adventure or just going along with it for the other's sake. The couples of interest to us would share that approach." Since you do not appear interested in single males, you might want to add a statement to that effect. I suspect as hot as she looks, you will still get inundated with emails from desperate clueless men though. As for your pics, they look great. But they clearly were taken at different phases (different hair colors, and facial hair). I'd get rid of any that aren't currently representative of you. Hope this helps. Have fun.
San Quentin CA			Username hidden (8604 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thank you very much for the reply, and I most definitely will.
Concord NC			Username hidden (8 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	We've had our profile up for a few weeks now, and though we don't feel it's bad, we're sure that it could use some improvements. First of all being photos, of course, which we are on top of. What else could it use? Does it read well? We've gotten a pretty fair amount of responses, and have had the pleasure of meeting a few people from the site. That being said there is always room for improvement, so if anyone would be able and willing to help with suggestions it would be great and definitely appreciated. Thanks in advance to all of you Purple and Green Loops
Concord NC			Username hidden (8 post)

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