We agree with the other replies - Need to place at least one or two more PG pics in your public profile - Just smudge your face (picture manager here on SLS has nifty tools for that) if you are concerned about being identified. Also, female half here says that a pic of you in a suit would go a longgggg way to getting her attention. She's a sucker for a guy in a well tailored suit.
Otherwise, we think you did a great edit of the profile. Reads fine for us.
Good-luck!
J&I

Would have to agree with both comments. Massage your wording, pull your thoughts together. To us, your profile seems detached or broken, like you were nervous when writing it. And additional pictures would be a plus, clothed would be really nice. As is, we see a single guy with a nude default pic, not much reason to read your profile further -- you're picture says, "See this? I'm the same as any other single guy." Pull yourself out of the crowd with a nice G-rated picture or several, giving members something to look forward to when you give them access to your privates. Good luck.

Gina -

Thanks so much! Will pour myself a glass of wine and get right to it. I appreciate it, and hope you have a ball! :)

Ok...take out every single one of the LOLs...it does make you sound nervous about the whole thing. And also the parenthetical comments...not all, but most of them, esp. the first where you state you're a 2 or so on the experience level. Most people just see the rating, and it's a psychological thing that looks negative. Also, the term "nothing less than Incredible." Why don't you just say "Incredible?" Be more concrete, it exudes confidence that way. Just needs tightened up where things are overstated. The cliched "I won't bite" is stated twice. So, look at it again, and my advice I give to a lot of people is to read your profile out loud. If it sounds forced or "phoney" to you out loud, it will to those who read it as well, and it should flow more naturally or at least read more clearly. Good luck, Gina

Cayne -

Hi! Thanks for the feedback... Very interesting comments and I will definitely think about what you said. Good luck to you two as well!

Any other comments for members? :)

First and foremost you need more pictures on your profile.

Also, while there may be couples here that do not mind "taking things slow" with a single guy or the fact that you are shy etc, I know that I (Mrs. Cayne) personally do not have the time nor the patience to coax sex out of someone or play teacher. You do not come across as very confident sexually to me in your profile (but someone else might read it completely differently so who knows!)

Good luck though and I hope you find what you are looking for!

Hi all. :) I'd appreciate any feedback on my profile, especially from ladies and couples :) Please be gentle (I'm new to this) but honest (I can take it.... I think! LOL).

Thanks!!!