Teh phrase "in the past" in two of your informative sentences should be changed...it sounds as if you've had fun or been fun "in the past" only. What are you looking for now? You can just simply say "Sharon is bi and has enjoyed women." Simply stated. You could probably fill in a few details, but for the most part, I think your profile states briefly who you are and what you want. Have fun, enjoy, be patient...good things will come.

G.

I agree with all of cayne's observations what are your interests outside of the lifestyle? What are your likes, what would you like to explore. Move the email line to later in the the profile or don't use it at all it makes it start out negative. Saying something like "a reply to our email (even a not interested) would be appreciated" is less negative and will get the point across.

Good luck!

pirategirl

You contradict yourself in the first section of your profile. You state in the second sentence that you answer every email but then go on to state that if pictures aren't open you wont respond... so which is it?

"First off let us say that we don't like people who will not reply to e-mail."

I'd take that sentence out all together... its overly negative.

I'd add some further information about what you want specifically and maybe feel out the "fantasy" section with a bit more details. The profile is mostly negative and doesn't really give a good snapshot of who you are or what you want.

Hope that helps and happy hunting! :)

We don't have much luck in meeting people on this site. Could it be our profile? It would be of great help if someone would take a look at it and see what we can do to make it better.

Thank you
Randy N Sharon