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TOPIC: Positive Criticizm wanted!!! What do you think of my profile
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Jayd...I just loved your profile! Change nothing, except maybe my pet peeve of misuse of apostrophes (those nasy little things) where none should be, as in the plural of the word "pic." Should be "pics," not "pic's."
Would love to see more pics, and it's a pic's priority to pique our interest. (It's bad, it's late, I hate all the abbreviations too) Good luck, you'll certainly have fun in the lifestyle, Gina |
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All spelled correctly but the "your" towards the bottom should be a "you're"
I think it's appealing and has a touch of humor; you're having fun with it and with life and that's attractive. You could just say you're a communications major and leave out the other part of that. You make people want to know more about you, and that's a good thing. Good luck! Ohio is a hard area to conquer, so be patient. One of those cougars, Gina |
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