Please review my profile: Swingers Discussion 89937

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Please review my profile: Swingers Discussion 89937

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TOPIC: Please review my profile

Created by: fishbone19464 Original Starting post for this thread:
I would like some ideas...what work's and what doesn't look good on my profile. Any input would be appreciated. Thanks

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User Details are only visible to members.	Get better pictures. Take some pics that make you look dynamic. Nobody wants to see you loafing on a couch, go out side and have someone take a pic of you doing something. A strange thing I noticed is that you are looking for a LTR w/ the right woman. That might keep away potential couples since most people on the "swingers" page are married or dating couples.
San Antonio TX			Username hidden (13 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks for the help. I'll take another look, and tighty it up a bit. I'm working on getting more pictures to post. Thank you for your input, I appreciate it.
Pottstown PA			Username hidden (3 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	I would recommend taking a look at some of the single male posters in the forums...try the ones where someone asks about "what do you look for in a single guy?" and topics such as those. Read the profiles of some of the successful guys in here and go from there. Your pictures are good, maybe redundant, but you can always add some different ones as you have them. Break up your paragraphs more...you have a lot of various ideas just flowing from one sentence to another, and that makes it difficult to read. Some people will automatically turn away from a very long rambling paragraph (and hey, I ramble on quite a bit myself!). There are some plural tenses that have apostrophes in them that should be removed, and I would suggest you read your profile out loud to get the best feel for how it sounds. You'll automatically make some changes when you vocalize your writing. You might want to shorten some of the more "negative" concerns you have, such as "Hey, I'm trying to quit smoking, anyone have any ideas or help?" might sound better than the several sentences you write about smoking. Hope this helps. Good luck, Gina
San Antonio TX			Username hidden (5609 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	I would like some ideas...what work's and what doesn't look good on my profile. Any input would be appreciated. Thanks
Pottstown PA			Username hidden (3 post)

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TOPIC: Please review my profile