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TOPIC: Please review-critique my profile :-)
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| Created by: swingindinvegas | The original post for this thread was deleted. |
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Your pictures are great...attractive.
Do you have preferences? You don't really state any, but you do present yourself and your ideas well. Is there a type of couple or female that you would NOT like to meet? Besides pushy, dishonest. etc. As the female half of a couple reading your profile, I would be hesitant to email you because I have no idea if I/we would be the "type" that would interest you. Maybe a line or two would help that concern. Gina |
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Slimpikins,
Your profile is pretty good. I would delete the last couple sentences under the "What We Looking For" section. You want to come off positive, upbeat, funny, mature, and intellectual. So take out anything that makes you come off negative. Your pics are great, and most of your text is fine. You're a paying member which is good. Red flags: No default pic. This alone might cause us to skip your profile. You've been a member since 2005 and you have no certs. HUGE red flag for us. You have to get some certs! Good luck! |
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Panama City Beach FL |
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Any comments on mine would be appreciated.
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Medina OH |
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The written content describing you is a bit thin. You could add a few more sentences there, but keep them mature. The one picture with a white background looks like a mug shot! j/k! I'd scratch that pic and add a full body shot perhaps in a swimming suit or boxers. Perhaps add some humor via pics and/or text.
Some positives include: Classy pics Classy text, albeit short You're a paid member The only significant negative is a lack of certifications. Good luck! |
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