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TOPIC: Please help with profile

Created by: Loving_Leo_Couple Original Starting post for this thread:
Thank you for your help in reviewing our profile. We are interested in what you think about the text of our profile. Are there questions you may have that we haven't answered? Is there anything that is unclear? We are not asking whether you are physically attracted to us or not based on our pictures, however general comments about the pictures are welcome. Some will and some will not find us attractive. We may or may not be your 'type' of swingers - we may play differently from you - but either way we feel that we can benefit from your advice. Thank you again and we can't wait to read and consider your replies.

Created by: Loving_Leo_Couple
Original Starting post for this thread:

Thank you for your help in reviewing our profile. We are interested in what you think about the text of our profile. Are there questions you may have that we haven't answered? Is there anything that is unclear? We are not asking whether you are physically attracted to us or not based on our pictures, however general comments about the pictures are welcome. Some will and some will not find us attractive. We may or may not be your 'type' of swingers - we may play differently from you - but either way we feel that we can benefit from your advice. Thank you again and we can't wait to read and consider your replies.

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User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks for the feedback. Our profile is definitely still a work in progress. Feel free to check back from time to time and let us know what you think. : ) D&S
Plano TX			Username hidden (15 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	LLC, thank you for opening your profile. Points for you for having pictures of both male and female, faces included are added bonus. Also, I find it very sexy, that your profile is spelled out correctly! Kudos to you! The sentence, that starts with "It is just that friendships..." in the first section of your profile is longer than any sentence I had ever put together, lol. At best, it could use a few commas, however the sentence is just too long and loses its meaning long before that final period. Try to remove that sentence and see, how the whole paragraph reads for you. To me, the paragraph that starts with "We prefer to meet up..." could be moved to "describe yourself" section. The last paragraph, starting with "When it comes to...", I see in "what else we would like to say" section of a profile. Just my opinion on how I would split the first part of your profile. Also, the paragraphs could use an actual space between them, like you can see in my post here. Part about condom use was not the usual "safe sex only" thing, but OK for me. Just something different from what I am used to reading. Maybe you can try this, "condoms required for full swap"? Again, if you are happy with your wording, it should stay the way it is. Just another option to look at. I have not found out, what and whom you are ACTUALLY looking for... Any specific preferences, as far as your potential playmates, that you might want to include in the first section of your profile? You might want to mention, whether or not you accept and/or give certifications. Some people do not want any, and that is fine. However, being online for a longer period of time without any might make you look as fakes. Just a little disclaimer, "we do not do the cert thing", or something of that nature should suffice. Good luck and have fun!
Panama City Beach FL			Username hidden (1929 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	We should be visible now.
Plano TX			Username hidden (15 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	LLC, your profile is still hidden from single females, but I see, you are getting some advice from couples :)
Panama City Beach FL			Username hidden (1929 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Loving_Leo_Couple, the only thing we might point out, in our opinion it seems the entire profile is about you two. In its own right nothing wrong with it. The first section is for what your looking for and to us it seem to be an extension of your description. maybe reword it to describe what you two would find attractive in someone your willing to meet up with. we are a little put off with your condom use section maybe tweak that part. not everyone is as up front and to the point. maybe that could be tweaked and perhaps the details would be something left for private conversations. but other than that your pictures are great and your profile is to the point a little massage here and there may make it better. We wish you great fun!
Pleasant Gap PA			Username hidden (34 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	TB - It is true that we are pretty much only interested in meeting couples at this time. However, since we have solicited for help with our profile, we have opened up our profile to single men and women. We hadn't thought about that. Thanks for bringing that to our attention.
Plano TX			Username hidden (15 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	TB - must be just looking for Couples...same message here. LOL Best to you on your adventure nonetheless.
Amherst OH			Username hidden (2271 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Loving_Leo_Couple, welcome to the forums! Your profile looks very concise, and at the same time speaks volumes to me... The message I get is, "Sorry, this member has chosen to have their profile hidden from Single Females." Lol. With that being said, if you are not hidden from couples and/or single men, your profile can be viewed by them. I hope you will receive words of wisdom and sound advice from other members. Good luck and have fun!
Panama City Beach FL			Username hidden (1929 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thank you for your help in reviewing our profile. We are interested in what you think about the text of our profile. Are there questions you may have that we haven't answered? Is there anything that is unclear? We are not asking whether you are physically attracted to us or not based on our pictures, however general comments about the pictures are welcome. Some will and some will not find us attractive. We may or may not be your 'type' of swingers - we may play differently from you - but either way we feel that we can benefit from your advice. Thank you again and we can't wait to read and consider your replies.
Plano TX			Username hidden (15 post)

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