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TOPIC: Please give our Profile a once over
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Any constructive criticism would be much appreciated
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Looks pretty good. There are a couple of errors...In the first paragraph there's a place where you've said "were" but it should be "we're." At the end of the paragraph there's a "your" where it should be "you're." And a public pic of him would be great. That's it!
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a Pic of him even if not a face pic would help some couples. Patrick Pattie
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